Michele Schipper, a robbery victim, had a good sense of self-defense when it comes to fighting back.
Yesterday, Michele Schipper, was taken by surprise when getting out of her car where she was
approached by a 6 foot, tall man. He told her to give him her purse. Just before the man was close
enough to grab the purse Shcipper quickly turned around and kicked him.
Schipper said, “I was afraid he wouldn’t stay down, that he would find retribution,” she continued, “ When he was down, I gave him a roundhouse to the nose. I just hit him as hard as I could, an undercut as hard as I could.”
With 3 big hits to the man she could see blood spurting, her only thought was to get away. She ran to the local motel from down the street and called the cops. Unfortunately, when cops arrived the robber was gone.
The robbery occurred around 4 p.m.. Unfortunately there were no other witnesses around at the time of the robbery. Schipper explained that she believed the robber came from behind a dumpster, and had just been waiting there since no one else was around.
Schipper had never taken any kind of self-defense class or anything of that kind. When she grew up she liked to wrestle with guys, and her friends. Also, her dad had been into boxing and weightlifting, which kept Schipper busy by playing with the equipment, giving her strength and power.
“It just came instinctively,” Schipper said, “It really only lasted a second.” Schipper would have had only lost $10 out of her purse. She defines herself as indignant, and that she was.
Great details! However I did notice in the third sentence you spelled Schipper wrong, also I noticed that you didn't spell out the number three. Make sure your proof reading before submitting the stories! Otherwise I liked the organization of the story how you told about the story first then gave background info on the victim.
ReplyDeleteI agree, numbers 1-10 need to be spelled out. other than that i like your lead, its short but gave the main point of the story. The way you oranized all the facts was good, you turned the interview into a good story.
ReplyDeleteI agree with first two comments, and great way to turn an interview into a story. Very organized and understandable.
ReplyDeleteI agree, great way to turn an interview into a story! It is very good.
ReplyDeleteGreat job at getting those quotes in there! I had a hard time fitting mine in with this one.
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